Monthly Archives: March 2014

Copy Cat Covers?!?

Picture Okay, I’ve been reading a lot over the last few months and something has caught my eye.  Caught my attention enough to make me open this laptop to ponder it on this blog….
Copy cat covers on books.  Now, it’s not every book out there, not by a long shot, but more than once this month I’ve seen a familiar picture with a different title on it.  I have no less than 3 pairs of these on my kindle, not to mention others I’ve seen randomly throughout Amazon, Goodreads, and Smashwords.

Now, if the cover artist gave permission to others to use the image, that’s great, two thumbs up.  However, I know for sure that one of the pairs of books had a cover uniquely done for the author, with models, photography, etc.  The process was actually covered in the author’s blog a good while back.  Which is why I did a double take when I came across the same final image, with only the background and title tweaked, a few days ago.  I investigated the second cover image and it’s being claimed by an indie cover artist I won’t name.  Let’s just say I doubt the image the artist used was procured legit.  Now, that’s my opinion however, as I have not asked if it was.  What gets me is this authors….

Why would you want your cover to look like another author’s?

If you found out it was a copy or if yours was copied, how would that make you feel?  I personally feel embarrassed and it isn’t even mine in either case.

So just a tiny teaser about book 2, Pillars of Light

A little bit about Pillars of Light, Bk 2 of The Destiny Series (wip):

Three pillars of light become beacons of hope for Moira, Airi, and Belamar as they continue their quest to save the Dehil and stop Lenos from continuing his bloody vengeance. They must survive a world darkened by rage and anguish—a land at the epicenter of the war begun three hundred years before —and untangle a web of ancient memories to discover the answers they need to become who they are meant to be.

But what does it all have to do with The Four? New friends arise as long buried secrets reveal an even darker evil waiting patiently to be freed. Moira , Airi, Belamar, and their new companions must come to grips with answers that no one ever expected in order to keep Lenos from freeing the Dro-Aconi.

Excerpt:

“He chased all but Tanari and Lenos away,” Echara adds softly, her mouth drawing tight with pain. “Even us.”

“I’m sorry,” I don’t know what else to say. Sorry is such a poor word for the sadness in her gaze.

“It was meant to be,” she adds with a bitter laugh. “All of this.”

“What?” I stop in my tracks and snag her arm. She halts, her steady gaze on mine as if she’d known what I was going to do. Of course she knows. She can read minds.Image

Cover Love: Demons At Deadnight by A E Kirk

Image I love the colors of this cover, which I believe was done by Elena Dudina. The cover is stylized, but not over crowded with contrived symbolism that tries to give too much of the plot away visually.  It is perfect for the tone of the book and a favorite.

The Youngest Immortal: Chapter One

NOTE:  Serial prequel (distant past) to The Unknown Sun which is soon to be published. This work of fiction is for entertainment purposes only and I retain full copyrights of the following original material.

 

Chapter One

 

 

At first they didn’t see her atop the great horse.

     She sat low, riding bareback, her cloak and frayed robes blending well into the brown stallion. Narrow shoulders hunched beneath a worn cloak and only two long golden plaits of hair tumbled from beneath the shadow darkened hood.  The villagers who first noted that the horse did have a rider were closest to her path and so stopped to study the stranger with wary, hollow eyes. When she didn’t stop to ask their leave to enter the village, a low murmur began to swell among the throng of people. More villagers stopped, most too startled by the sight of the stranger to do much but stare and mutter worriedly. More than one woman gathered her laundry, wares, and children, and hurried into flimsy clapboard homes.

     At the center of the village a great, roaring fire provided most of the light, warmth, and cooking needed for the entire village. The buildings themselves were arranged in a large circle so that each door faced it, but were perched several feet off the rocky ground on stilts or platforms.

     The stranger let the horse move unhurriedly toward the fire, as if she didn’t attempt to lead him at all. The horse stopped short, but well within the radius of the comforting light and warmth. She slid free of the horse in a blur of motion, so that the villagers who now had all paused to watch, stared agape and noted that she was now standing before the fire, gloved palms stretched toward the wildly flickering flames. Even standing now, she still seemed oddly petite and where her dark robe, cloak, and worn leather boots touched the dry earth, the colors seemed to mysteriously blend together so that they were indistinguishable.

     More villagers hustled away and all around the circle flimsy wood doors slammed shut. A few brave souls, maybe a dozen, remained—determined to get answers from their uninvited guest. They approached her slowly, in a solid mob, but with no one declared leader to parley, they were at a loss for a long, tense moment. The small figure seemed to not notice their approach and continued warming her gloved hands. The closer they shuffled to her, the more they as a collective realized just how slight she was.

     “Why, she’s but a little girl!” Aggie Bishop gasped as she pushed to the front of the mob. They halted, murmuring loudly, and watched tensely as Aggie Bishop moved to stand just behind the girl.

     “Little Lady?” Aggie swallowed dryly but stopped short of touching the strange girl. “Do you need help?”

     “No.”

     Their collective gasp would have been comical if the situation hadn’t been so dire. Her voice was low, soft, yet grainy—the voice of a child mixed with the voice of an elder. Aggie licked her lips and stepped closer.

     The hood moved this time and Aggie caught a flash of gold eye shine within its shadowed depths. Maybe it was just the fire reflecting—but Aggie didn’t think so. The figured turned back to the fire again, her flowing gold plaits sliding silently against her clothing.

     “It is you that need my help, I am afraid,” she spoke again, puncturing the stunned silence so that it erupted into a chaos of cries and protests as the remaining villagers spoke out in terror.

     “What do you mean?” Aggie wasn’t sure who which feared more—the mysterious child or what she meant.

     “Evil is coming. I am charged with protecting you,” her words were soft, but firm, almost commanding—confident.

     “What evil? Who are you?” Aggie hushed the clamoring crowd with her bold words and they watched and waited now, all eyes on the small figure silhouetted against the crackling bonfire. The hood turned again and another glint of gold flared in its depths.

     “I am called Emaranthe.”

     The hood slid free of the gilded braids and the entire crowd gasped. Her beauty was vivid and unmistakable—as was her youth. Golden waves, loosely braided in two streamers that threatened to escape their bonds hung to her waist. Skin that was creamy in color and blemish free glowed in the dying firelight.

     It was her eyes, however, that held everyone still.

     Vivid, electric, golden eyes watched their reactions with patience. Only a slightly arched eyebrow betrayed any inner humor at the situation. The flickering flames caught her eyes and they seemed to glitter even brighter though the sun was sinking fast and shading their desert valley.

     “Emaranthe? I am Aggie …” Aggie swallowed, finding it hard to speak in the face of such youth and beauty—deadly beauty, she realized astutely.

     “I mean none harm here, but I do come charged to aide your village.” Emaranthe turned back to the fire again, tugging the thin hood back up and once again returning her gaze to the shadows.

     “Aide us? How can you aide us? You are but a child!” Isolde Morre ducked around Aggie and brandished a small stick.

     “A child? I haven’t been a child for many, many years.” Emaranthe sighed. She studied the small group of villagers from the shadows of the cloak. Her uncanny eyes settled on Isolde, noting the old woman’s withered body and silvered hair that strung unkemptly from a loose chignon. This woman was knowledgeable, an elder.

     “Hah, you can’t be more than ten summers!” A man’s voice huffed from the throng, but he did not dare to show himself.

     “Eighteen. I was eighteen summers.” Emaranthe whispered so softly that only the village elder and Aggie heard. Her gold eyes glittered in the firelight as the sun sank behind the red and orange cliff walls to the west.

     “Immortal—she’s an Immortal.” Isolde gasped and licked her cracked lips. Aggie, only barely hearing her, looked up in time to catch the golden flare from within the shadowed hood.

      Isolde dropped to her kneels and bowed her head in absolute respect, her gnarled, bent fingers clutching at the hapless stick, streamers of silver hair dragging loose and tangling in the stiff desert breeze.

     “Please, forgive us Immortal. We meant no disrespect!” Aggie took the cue from the elder and bowed as well, followed quickly by the remaining villagers, until even those cowering within the rickety shacks bowed low as well.

     The silence grew agonizingly long. Golden eyes studied the cowering, humbled throng with aching sadness.

     “Please, rise. I ask no one for homage.” Emaranthe called out so softly that a few wondered that she had even spoken aloud. When all had risen again, she let the hood slide free once again and once more people wondered at her youth.

     As they watched in silent awe, she reached over her shoulder with one hand and slid free a long, slender, twisted wood staff—something that had moments before simply not been there.

     It appeared to be an entire tree branch grown for the sole purpose of Arcane use. At its peak the staff was partially curled, like a shepherd’s crook, but was charred and splintered midway through the curve. She held it away from her, over the flames of the bonfire and the villagers watched the flames flicker, twist, and curl over and up the length of the staff. At the end of the splintered curl the flames danced and twisted. Neither the staff nor her hand blackened and burned and here was proof of her identity.

     “How can one so young be an Immortal?” Aggie watched the mesmerizing fire dance along the staff. Emaranthe caught and held Aggie’s wondrous gaze for a long moment and Aggie saw a glimmer of sorrow pass across them like a shadow. The girl’s thin shoulders hunched even more into the threadbare cloak as she struggled with a tide of long buried memories, her strange eyes hollow and wise despite her youth.

     “Please, tell us, child.” Isolde sank to the ground. “I have never heard rumor of one called so young before!”

     Emaranthe closed her eyes and leaned on the fiery staff for support.

     “I remember little before it happened. As if my life before held little meaning until the calling. Yet, I know I was more. More bodies fitted with my soul, many names and faces long forgotten. But that day, the one I do remember, was cold…and growing dark. The easterly winds were bringing a wild spring storm. I remember seeing the clouds gather angrily over the mountains, but I could not leave my flock,” Emaranthe swallowed. “I built a small fire beneath the overhand of a large boulder and hoped to escape the worst of the storm.”

     The villagers were leaning forward in rapt attention now.

     “My goats and sheep huddled nearby and I was confident that they and I could weather the storm,” she continued after a slight pause. “But something else was moving with the storm as well, I could feel it in the wind—a warmth, a fire, evil and anger.”

     More than one villager gasped, “Dro-Aconi!”

     “I stayed put, my crook in hand as my only defense, and watched as the thing moved with the storm ever closer. Lightning tore the sky and rain fell before it. I held a vain hope it would pass me by and leave me in peace.” Emaranthe opened her eyes and Aggie saw a depth of pain in them that she had never seen before in anyone.

     “They came then, wreathed in fire and an ancient sorcery I had no hope of defeating. Giant winged demons of fire and torment. I held them off for a short while, brandishing my crook as pitiful weapon, my young body untrained for war,” she swallowed dryly and closed her eyes once more.

     “My crook was torn from my bloodied fingers and tossed into the fire. I wrenched free of the demons and dragged it from the flames in desperation.”

     Aggie flinched at the terror glittering in Emaranthe golden eyes as they opened again.

     “Burning, smoking I wielded the staff, crying to the sky for a savior—but none came and I was at my end.”

     Emaranthe lifted the smoldering staff and returned it to its place at her back where it once again vanished into shadow. Tears streamed silently down Isolde’s wizened face, tracking through her wrinkled flesh like paths of a river way.

     “I don’t know why, but the demons fled and I was left dying beside my fire, in the cold rain…alone. I could only wait to die, want to even, and await a new lifetime and forget this one. I held onto the staff, still afire, and felt the darkness calling me within the thunder, wind, and rain.” Emaranthe turned back toward the fire and held her gloved hands out to the flames again.

     “The next thing I knew I was standing, gripping my fiery staff and gasping. I was back, my face unchanged, my soul scarred but unyielding to death. Immortal and powerful at the last.”

     The silence was long and awed until Emaranthe turned suddenly to face the small crowd. Gold eyes watched the growing darkness behind them. A smile, small and sad, twisted her lips slightly.

     “Good. They approach.”

     “What?”

     “Ahh!”

     The throng of villagers turned and stumbled about, looking for an unseen foe.

     “Hold, friends. I did not mean evil approaches,” Emaranthe sighed and moved toward the large horse that stood unconcernedly nipping at a patch of weeds at the edge of the firelight. “My companions approach from the South. We are here to help your village keep its secret.” she led the horse further from the bonfire and to a small weedy field behind the shacks.

     “What? How does she know?”

     “Oh no!”

     Isolde followed the girl at a reverent distance, struggling to think of something, anything to say. The clamor of the worried villagers behind them was steadily rising in fear and anger.

     “Madam Isolde, three of my companions will be arriving any moment,” Emaranthe said and tipped her head slightly to look at the old woman. Gold eyes burned in the darkness. “I will need to lead them here. You must keep the villagers calm until we return.”

     The girl was suddenly atop the huge horse and gone.

      Isolde stared into the darkness, watching the black shadows play and dance over the desert landscape behind their village as the bonfire flickered behind her.

     “Thank The Four. Oh, thank The Four,” she cried softly into her patched apron.

     Hope had arrived.

Book Review Roulette: Wings of Arian by Devri Walls

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Wings of Arian 

by Devri Walls

Note: I am reviewing my own Kindle copy that I bought.


Wings of Arian is a true Fantasy novel, one of breathtaking honesty that made me once again realize just why I am also a Fantasy writer.  It is set in a land ruled by peace and harmony and anything magical or evil is kept secret from all the people.  Blinded by this illusion of utter and eternal peace the King is not prepared for the fact that evil is awakening and to battle it magic must be sought and used.  An entire society of magical creatures has kept silent, waiting for the Solus to return to battle the evil.  The Solus is someone with amazing magical powers and by his side would be a Protector.  Together the two will drive off evil and return their world to peace.

Just one problem.  


The Solus is a young teenage girl, Kiora, and her Protector, Emane,  is a non-magical Prince.  Neither a female nor a non-magical Protector have ever held these roles and many are uncertain as to their success as they train for war.


Kiora is determined, but afraid of her abilities…she had always had them, even muffled by her and her family’s ignorance, and she blames herself for their deaths…deaths she had foreseen  in a vision, but her family had ignored.  She feels a depth of emotion, of empathy, for everyone that will hinder her ability to fully become who she was meant to be.  Without her Protector she will fall.


Emane is the son of the King and he has always had a blind and disdainful eye for magic. Now teamed up with a beautiful girl who is afraid to trust herself, and he himself unable to fully protect her without magic abilities…he must decide who he is and where is loyalty, and heart, lies quickly and put aside his differences with magic to save the girl who must save them all.


A host of magical beings guide them through their journeys to find their gifts and teach them to overcome their faults so that they may defeat the evil sorcerer, Dralazar for the final time.

Wings of Arian is not ashamed of being a Fantasy novel.  It asks no permission nor gives apologies for the beautiful settings, people, and creatures.  Dragons, Pegasuses (Pegasi?), wizards, magic spells, fallen faeries…the author does not beg you to believe in the story…but unashamedly weaves the tale as if it was all very very real.

Positive:  The true honest writing that does not apologize for being Fantasy.  The depth of the characters, magical and not, is astonishing and makes you cry, flinch, cheer, and swear out loud while joining them in their world.

Negative:  The only downside was almost technical.  There was an abrupt gap in the flow of the story at the very very beginning that felt like an entire chapter was deleted. I actually had to reread it several times to figure out how A got to B, but I moved on…the rest of the magnificent story was calling me.  

If you love Fantasy unashamedly, then you will adore this book.

Rating: 4.5 stars of 5  (if that odd plot/scene gap was fixed it would totally be a 5)

Cover Love: Sora’s Quest by TL Shreffler

Image  Created by Ms. Shreffler herself, this cover is, in my opinion, the perfect representation of what a YA fantasy cover should look like. Classy, yet magical, simple, yet mesmerizing…no edgy clutter, half naked women with swords (which are perfectly brilliant in Paranormal Romance btw), no mysterious symbolism that has no tie in with the plot.  I enjoy the colors and artistic style, which complement the book perfectly (look for a review in the future). Sora’s Quest can be found here.

Indie Publishing update: The Unknown Sun is coming soon

Hi all!  I just wanted to throw out some information regarding my debut novel, The Unknown Sun.  As many people know it is currently being edited by a professional and the cover was professionally done by the genius Victoria of Whit&Ware Design.  I plan to reveal the cover soon, most likely mid April, when I have my book back from the editor’s and have smoothed out whatever kinks were found.  That being said, I am hoping (crossed fingers and toes here) for a May 1st debut.

So, what is The Unknown Sun?  It is a full length fantasy novel meant for the YA audience and it is the first in a trilogy, The Destiny Series. The trilogy is about a girl, and her friends, whose destinies have been shaped through time and space so they could become who they were meant to be.  What that is exactly, you ask? You will have to read it to believe it.

So what about the first book, The Unknown Sun?  Here is what the first book in The Destiny Series is about:

Scarred by the accidents that had claimed her parents and sisters, Moira is rescued from a brutal attack by twins Airi and Belamar. The winged heirs to the throne in Skyfall, they instantly have a life changing connection to Moira and together the three friends learn things that will either alter their destinies…or set them right. 

Skyfall is dying, and the Gods who had created and protected Airi and Bel’s world have been missing since the Great War. Moira, Airi, and Belamar must find a journal left by the twins’ deceased mother, Tanari. It tells of a prophecy that must be fulfilled to find the Gods known as The Unknown Sun so that Skyfall can be saved. 

Deeper, darker secrets unravel around the three friends as a revolution threatens their quest and they are hunted by the very being that had tried to destroy Moira on Earth.  Tanari knew more than she had let on and within her journal a story is more than it seems, the past foretells the future, and a far reaching plan is unveiled.

Tanari was not a Skylander, but one of The Unknown Sun, an Immortal, and her powerful gifts have been given to Moira.  Why did Tanari reach across time and space to entrust a simple human girl with saving Skyfall and why does another God want her, and The Unknown Sun, dead? 

 

What do you think?